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lonesom love

Didn't let myself love you
cause you didn't love me back
theres no good in a love like that.

then when you said you loved me
I said I loved you to
and I let myself fall in love with you

something in me was set free
as you gave me something more
something great and worth living for

then suddenly you went away
you left without a trace
leaving such a cold and empty space

so it seems I love you
and you don't love me back
there really is no good in a love like that

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Written October 5th, 2005

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  • strangerskiss
    October 27, 2005
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    amazing stuff poppy!

  • Love-is-Eternal
    October 15, 2005
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    Well i can relate to this first hand. dont worry about it though cause theres somebody out there that loves you and when you find him he wont ever leave you. i hope everything turns out good for you. you really did a good job expressing how you were feeling though. i loved the poem.

  • Soyunatrajediaporti
    October 5, 2005
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    awsome

    Hey i can relate to this poem b/c i just feel the same way...