I would wake up in the morning,
with my head hung low to the floor.
'Why get up? There's no point in today.'
I repeated as I walked out the door.
Day in and day out,
my life went on like this.
Feeling empty and longing;
longing for love's first kiss.
Then you came into my life
and I'd never felt so alive.
And as each day went on,
I knew that I'd survive.
I was falling in love with you
and it was almost too fast.
I didn't want to scare you off
because I wanted us to last.
Then the day you kissed me
I knew that it was true.
The way we connected was perfect
and I knew that I loved you.
I was falling, and it happened so fast;
It was almost to much to take.
And I prayed that you would love me back,
and my heart you would not break.
Then you told me you loved me too,
I could have almost cried.
Because the way I felt about you
is something I can't deny.
I love you so much, I can't explain
I feel like I could scream.
Everything about you is perfect,
I seem to be living in a dream.
I will love you forever and a day,
every year and every season.
And I'll wake up in the morning;
but now I have a reason.
Author notes
this was written about my boyfriend...i love him so much 
I Love you Mike!!
Written October 5th, 2005
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Thanks loads for the applause! I really enjoyed this poem, I've felt like this before, its not nice.
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MAZING!
"Then you came into my life
and I'd never felt so alive.
And as each day went on,
I knew that I'd survive.
I was falling in love with you
and it was almost too fast.
I didn't want to scare you off
because I wanted us to last."
Having recently experienced love like this i can connect! IT is truely a well written and emotionaly heart felt poem i love ti its great! keep writting!
MWAH! -
I like the way you had love unfolding and your life becoming brighter and happier. It does indeed change our countenance. You brought that out quite well in fact. Thank you for entering my contesta nd good luck!
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This is very nice. I know how good you feel too.
I think the last stanza could have been something more but aside from that I really loved this. 
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well written. I thought it was gonna be about depression by the first stanza, but was pleasently surpised it was about love. I am totally waiting for this moment by the way and thats one of the reasons I liked your poem so much. Wonderful job!!!
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aaawwwwwww.....so truly wonderful!! I thought that you captured that so deep emotion of love so incredibly well!!!!! Write and RoCk On!!!!
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great
hey girl i loved this write sooo much!!! perfect rhyming and flow in this poem! this was amazing and i enjoyed reading it. this is one of my fav poems by you and i loved it. thats great you can feel this emotions and its by your b/f. i wish i were in love. oh well tho. used to be tho. anyways great job and keep it up!!!
love always,
Jenn -
Well written, I liked the way the first verse led in slowly; it said that life was humdrum. Then the poem takes off as love enters the poet’s life. The whole poem shifts up a gear. The poem works well.
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