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Eternalpoet / Acrostic

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Every time I write a poem my young friend Vic he
Tells me, “Hey  Jenni! is this about me? say it is!”
Each time I write back “Of course Vic, who else!”
Reckon he’s going to be surprised to read this! he he
Nicest young man I have ever met here on Allpoetry
Always polite and cheerful to everyone that he meets,
Loves to chat to me and Lady Joan as he calls angelica
People are drawn to Vic he has a very charismatic nature.
OH! and he calls me his pluff pluff spongy doll Jenni
Especially since I began calling him my little Chickadee!
Thank you Vic for being the best Friend that you are to me.


Author notes

Hey Vic, my Little Chickadee! This one IS for you.
"and i think u still got the same old problem in you. ... WHY DO u ALWAYS FORGET TO SAY YOUR GOOD POEMS ARE DEDICATED TO ME
He always signs off
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend....... just keep it up............ your humble little friend.........  ...........  .............  .............. - vic ( who else???

I've commented on Vics poem* "Feel" allpoetry.com/poem/1540661   Have commented on the others before
Written October 5th, 2005

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  • jenelda silver member
    October 8, 2005
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    He is sweet isn't he? And sooo handsome, no young girl can help but fall for that cheeky grin. Just as well I'm old enough to be his Mum but he is a darling and a good friend.

  • Sweet Angel16
    October 7, 2005
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    awwww dis poem is so sweet n cute n damn rite abt vic hes a brill guy n every1 i see gets attached to him definately! nice poem!gd luk in da contest


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    October 6, 2005
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    A honest and very sweet write. It's strange to see my son's face on a poem, but in a very nice way Good luck in the contest and thankyou for sharing La x


  • Vickie J
    October 5, 2005
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    Very sweet!! He is a cutie with that million dollar smile. Best wishes in the contest!~vj

  • jenelda silver member
    October 5, 2005
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    Sorry Jan, I got so excited about writing a poem for him, I forgot luckily his latest I hadn't read, otherwise I would've had to go right back through his poems. All done now
    Jenn


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 5, 2005
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    jen you forgot to comment on one of his poems...I know it's easy to do. Ihave also been guilty of that. LOL
    You best do it and put the name of the poem in the authors comments.
    Hugs


  • shubs
    October 5, 2005
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    A wonderful acrostic Jenni for Vic and the wonderful biodata of the main protagonist is for all to see out here and the aura and the charisma of the person is well shared==Shubs


  • Samplette gold member
    October 5, 2005
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    Ah Jen...this is such a delight...I can see his smile beaming as he reads it. Wonderful acrostic. Best wishes in the contest.
    Sam


  • jenelda silver member
    October 5, 2005
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    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS it IS for YOU


  • eternalpoet
    October 5, 2005
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    but i still need to ask you..... is dis poem for mEEEEEEEEEEEE??

  • jenelda silver member
    October 5, 2005
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    Hey Vic, glad you like it....SEE THIS ONE IS FOR YOU

    My little Chickadee
    Edited on Oct 05, 8:55 because ''.

  • eternalpoet
    October 5, 2005
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    5 Stars *****

    ... ok... who is this other vic then me...?? .. ... i need my answer... ... this time i need a concrete reply.. ... *Burps* ... and this oda vic is gonna get some hits from me... .... now stop smiling you got a dirty smile.. ..

    i didnt write the above stuff .. trust me.. ..i am innocent.. ....

    Let me just jump on Pluff Pluff Spongey Doll.... ... this is just soo goody woody... i dunno.. i am like.. speechless.. ... this ish shoo darling write.. from my darling friend.. that i may never forget it... you just tied another tight node in our frienship... well.. i still am waiting to go to the drive in and cuddle ur non silky rough hairs.. jk

    thanks very much.... erm... make sure u get a good driver while we enjoy in the backseat....

    good work.. thanks for sharing... me loviesh you my pluff pluff spongey doll

    *hugs and kisses*

    *gives choco*

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.............. just keep it up.............. your humble little friend................. ................. ..................... ................. - vic ( who else????? )


  • jenelda silver member
    October 5, 2005
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    Thanks Janet, he is a cutie isn't he?

    Jenn

  • Janice M Pickett
    October 5, 2005
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    hehehehe I just wrote himone also. hehehe A congrats for his Gold win at school. He really is a delightful young man. So CUTE. I bet he has a zillion girls after him LOL
    Thanaks for the entry Jen.

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