We met in the middle of April,
And fell in love the beginning of May.
June was the month we found out our news!
And told friends and family that same day.
July is the month i remember only too well,
The first time you hit me...
The second i fell.
I tried to forget that August,
Carried on-just you and me.
"Everything will change when our little one comes!"
Thats what you said,"you'll see!"
In September i over cooked your dinner,
For that you broke my jaw.
October the phone bill was a little to high,
So you punched me 'till i passed out on the floor.
But November had the coldest night,
I could feel the angry chill.
Did you mean to hurt me that bad?
Did you really want to kill?
You ripped out my heart that month,
Did you relize what you'd done??
You scared my mind for life...
Stamped on my sole...
And finally ended the life of our son.
Author notes
Just incase anyone thinks this is real..it's not!
Even though it does happen all over the world every day.
Written October 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- give me something from deep down, somewhere you dont want to go. by changeisconstant.
300 points, ended June 7, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rape, Abuse, Assault by silencethequestion.
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wow very powerful. I really love this one, i could relate with the sadness. and im glad this did not happen to you. good write
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great write, thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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great write. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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You really had be thinking this was real! I'm VERY glad it's not though. God, men to do such stuid things should be locked up for good
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If this is a work of fiction you have an amazing imagination. I have lived through this and couldn't have done a better job. Thank you
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It is like that
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Thank you everyone for the fab comments-where i'm from,and from my family...I always thought i was "disturbed" for writing something like this!So all of you are the first to see it.I was expecting a negative response,so thanx again
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really well written, it flowed really well x
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I agree there are so many ppl in the world that I'm sure have expierenced this. Thank you for such a beautiful write.
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GREAT JOB i love this kind of poems and it was interesting thanks for writing it..!
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considering it's not real, it's really good and sad! i think there are a lot of people in the world who can relate to this. i think your poem is really well written!
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