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something for nothing

her psychosis absorbed into a sickening bulge
beneath the surface of such pensively bloated features

this time she spent wasted
plastered across a palate bearing too much potential
for so much conception

and this was the very thing which frightened her:
those well hidden ideas sneaking behind
a white canvas
where inaccurate strokes
can make everything look more beautiful
in retrospect
but making the right choices
just might open the door
to all the correct places

Author notes


Written October 5th, 2005

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