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never noe if ya dnt go

do i want to?
to give away my body
to give to someone like you
would you treat it right?

what would you do with my heart
if you broke it
and it fell apart
would you mend it?

are you jus using me?
do you think im yuor toy?
that i cant see
that im just stupid and cant feel?

what happens tonight
will it last for ever
or would you want me out of your sight
to never see again

do i want to?
what would you do with my heart?
are you just using me?
it all happens tonight

Author notes

mer jus thoughts havent written in a wile as you can tell gettin craper really lol oh well xoxo
Written October 4th, 2005

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  • SousOU
    October 6, 2005
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    STANDING OVATION..miss u soo and its a blazing masterpiece jst like the author..i am speechless..take care nd keep in touch..see u soon..

  • darkenedsoul
    October 6, 2005
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    xPleNDuBioUS

    hey love, very good piece,i loved the curiosity the poem conveyed. it is like sarcasim in the form of a question, and it was brillance, keep up the good work love

    with a Bloody Tear
    and a Black Rose
    your Poet
    DarkenedSoul