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Lol!!!

LOL!

Anything we want, huh?
Those are always fun.
New and 100% original ideas...
Mwahahahaha hahahahahaha...

A contest about anything,
Or about everything?
Which way to look at it,
Which way indeed...

LOL!

These are always fun to do.
They get the blood flowing
And the brain thinking,
And it's so OPEN!!

So here is my poem,
Because I just didn't know
WHAT ON EARTH to write,
I made it about the contest.
(Original, I know )

LOL!

Author notes

yes, i know, its unoriginal, but it seemed like a good idea, and it was really fun to write...read it out loud, it might sound better
Written October 4th, 2005

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • j0eY
    April 4, 2006
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    actually it was pretty original ahaha. you are ALWAYS original julia. lol

  • see me fly
    November 17, 2005
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    great

    lol very weird i like it.
    well maby you can think of new poems soon.
    i hope you do.
    well anyway great write.
    never give up ok.

    Matthew

  • WandererofSouls
    October 14, 2005
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    It sounded original to me.


  • Autumn Whisper
    October 5, 2005
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    good poem 13darkhearts, very original, never heard of doing a poem like that before , very creative and imaginative
    Great poem once again
    best wishes as always
    Shimmering River

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 4, 2005
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    EXCELLENT!

    A good contest promotion!
    Excellent write, Julia. Thanks for entering.
    Good luck to you.
    Love Brian

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