You’re the morning calm.
You’re a summer day.
You’re the sun that gives me light.
You’re the evening breeze.
You’re the twilight shade.
You’re the stars that shine at night.
You’re the April showers.
You’re the breath of spring.
You’re the first flower to unfold.
You’re the first snow flake.
You’re the chilly wind.
You’re my warmth in winter’s cold.
You’re a timeless poem.
You’re a sweet love song.
You’re the melody that I hear.
You’re my taste of sweet.
You’re my sense of tough.
You’re the thought that brings a tear.
You’re the air I breath.
You’re my heart that beats.
You’re the reason my heart's in flight.
You’re my every thought.
You’re the prayer I pray.
You're my lover,my woman, my wife.
P.N.
A contest entry
- Love by Blooming Poet.
315 points, ended December 26, 2006, 8 entries
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Honorable mention
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What did you think
Comments
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Ain't you just a sweety. I am sure your beautiful wife adored this lovely dedication to her. It abounds with passion and adoration for the one closest to your heart. Your soul mate. Such a delightful piece to read and so warming. The photo of her is absolutely georgous! Thanks for sharing and congrats on all your trophies.
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this is so sweet... I wish there was a lot more men like you... thanks for entering my contest... good luck
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I thought the write was very fitting of the title. It is repetitioin but after all that is a poetic device and from my view, because of the title my mind was ready for it and I didn't think it was boring at all. I have a write I did for my husband and it is very similar. thank you for entering. Just a couple errors and both in the last stanza: In L3 of the last stanza, the word hearts needs an apostrophe and in the very last line the word lover is misspelled. A typo I think
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Thanks, my one finger typing oftimes wonders off on its own. And my mind usuly goes with it. hehe
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This is soooo sweet. Your wife should feel very honored that you wrote such a lovely poem just about her. You once again have a beautiful write her. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem for your wife. These are just the things us women love to hear from our men.
Great job, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Judging:
- Title: The title fits the poem perfectly.
- Emotions: It is full of love and is quit sweet.
- Wowness: Poor.
- Final word: The poem is fantastic but it is a bit boring since it all goes in the same style and every sentence starts with "You`re".
Do not be afraid to explore difrent ways of writing.
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This poem is sweet, I like it but I am sorry to tell you that the cap makes me loose the interest in reading it since cap normaly means your shouting...
Exept from that it was a good poem -
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OK i wrote it that way for a plaque .
So i changed it . It looks a lot better now... -
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Thank you very much, its a lot easyer to read it now. Like it a tiny bit better now
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Ohhhhh, I have felt that as well many times. Loved this piece!
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
Comming from you , Makes my day.
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Finally something I get. Much love anyway. Love always
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Thank you Queenie, your a doll.
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WOW.This poem is really good. The feelings that is gives off are warm and from the heart. This has a nice flow with good use of words.Keep it up and thank you for reading my poem.
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A wonderful expression of love and a tribute to that woman who owns your heart and call you by your rightful name, your Muse. This was wonderful to read and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the gift of your pen my friend. Good luck in the contest!
~Elba
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Thank you Sweet Touch.. To have such a comment from you is hart lifting.
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I simply adore what you have here. I can recall feeling all of these same things and so much more whn I was in love. Love fills us with such keen senses and I truly do believe the senses are heightened and piqued when we are in love. We are so open and ready to absorb everything good. Your poems expresses that thought ever so perfectly. I am very impressed by what I read here. Thank you for entering our contest and good luck!
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Thank you Stardust.. glad you liked..
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Oh, lol, I guess I did have one.
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Wonderful
Such a very tender and loving piece! A complete joy to read. Your poetic genre isn't limited and I love that. If I had an applause left, I'd give it to you.
Excellent
~Keri~
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