A thousand men desire her virtual lips.
Dare he take them?
She has a heart a thousand men dream of winning.
Dare he share his heart with hers?
Many men yearn for her virtual touch.
Dare he accept it if it is offered to him?
Others do not value these treasures
as they should be valued, as he does…
Through cyber space
in places meant only for lovers
something is happening…
his tender words have caught her up,
his thousand voices whisper on her ears,
and it hurts to be so far apart.
If this be a place meant for lovers
who are separated by oceans,
and this is a place they are destined to meet,
let their two hearts come together here
and share their warmth...
His voice whispers,
"The sea birds sing, the moon rises.
It is our night!"It is sooooo romantic...
They are borne by breezes
that bind them together across the oceans.
Her heart sings
and his spirit soars.
What better gift could there be?
They are now as if in a dream, together
sitting on the warm currents of air
high over the ocean that churns below.
They turn, and, finally facing one other,
gently settle upon the waves.
In Collaboration with the multicultural Arabian Jewel
Author notes
welcome back, AJ, the Sparkling One!
Written October 4th, 2005
In a list
- Love Era- AP Family and Friends • next in list
- Love Era- Collaborations • next in list
- * Arabian Jewel • next in list
A contest entry
- Love and Romance I [CONTEST] by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended October 6, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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lol! enjoy, Ayizan, my dear Ayizan!
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im hijacking ur background heheheheheheh
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Thanks, mum, I see a few places it needs work... thanks for the impetus!
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The two of you did a nice job here. This is very beautiful. Thank you both for entering. Good luck!
♥ Touchof1der -
It is decided, Part II goes, in respect to my collaborator!
Edited on Oct 04, 6:39 p.m. because ''. -
Thank you, Harper, each comment adds up as to how well a piece is 'working'! Part II does not please all yet, so I'll continue to work on it, but keep it to the beat of a differet drummer!
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thanks, Stella, and an applause for your fine blend of romance and humor!
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thanks, Nurse, I'm not giving up on the two contrasting parts, which is meant to depict differing aspects of a relationship, so it's back to the drawing board until I please all!
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thanks, my favorite grand niece!
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thanks, NooN, for your critical comment, it's back to work on it I go!
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Well, from the above comments I saw I needed to work on Part II, so I did several things, including addind the Part titles to prepare the reader for Part II's craziness...!
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and thank you for the critical eye, shewolf!
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What beautiful echoes in this poem. I hear it ont he the air that lvoes send, the enrgy that reaches and caresses the Universe. Beatuifully done!
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WOW... this is great AP dad (and Arabian Jewel)... You did a great job on this one!!! It is very well written!!!
Hugs,
Beth
PS Good luck in the contest!!!
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I love the take on the ocean- who knew that they could possibly make such a huge pie?? I love your backround as well- very pleasing on the eyes- love it, love it love it...- Harper
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hmmmm
sorry but for me partII spoiled it... it seemed a trite silly to add such nonsense to such a lovely and special first part
sorry.. just my opinion.... but I wish you luck in the contest
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I loved the pie, juxtaposing the hugeness of the world against a world record hugeness of the pie was a stroke of genius. No doubt the 2 sections conflict but contrast all the same. good one.
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giant couscous pie
I love it how bent I actually really enjoy the contrasts in writng styles in this piece it adds a really interesting edge
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Hey cyber uncle.. U did a great job here.. One way.. i was glad not to see that lightening background Good work deary..
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this was really lovely
although i must admit Part 1 was alot better and more nice than part 2...
"his tender words have caught her up,
his thousand voices whisper on her ears,
and it hurts to be so far apart."
i can realte to these line
an excellent write
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Thumbs up!Well done!
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