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Blazing Fires

Just for this moment
even if it's just this one
night, you and i shall be
one being; kisses ensue,
a single touch upon this
breast...

What you do to this body is nothing
like I've ever felt before with any
other person

Lips sparing like training
knights with swords...

limbs struggling just to grab
hold onto a small fraction that
encompasses the blazing heat

M
   E
 L
T
   I
 N
G
away with feverish pitch

And then...

then the peak is reached -the one
we've climbed over and over again
only now this time pleasurable
memories encircle this mind

...gentle caresses
persuade for more gentler
longings

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Written October 4th, 2005

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  • B Chandler
    December 10, 2005
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    tyvm for the compliment Jay


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    December 10, 2005
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    I like this poem. It is written so well. You really did a great job expressing yourself and your actions. I just love the way you wrote the word MELTING! I thought that was creative! Great Write!
    ~Jay~