With limbs intertwined with movements of your body
Has nothing but seductive lust cascade every nerve
To with the sweetest longing from your fingertip
Gliding across sensuously, my mind instantly goes blank
So I lay here...
A wanton to your endless desires to encompass the very core of this being
Just a simple kiss rives my aching breasts for your mouth and tongue
A profound and yet soft caress, reels this body to quiver for more
still, I won't move to the tuning you're giving me
Pressure escalates to when your body meld onto my own for a union
unlike anything thought off - incisive moans increasing
and still I lay here underneath that mountain
Pulsation
pressure building...
Ohhh this is what
lustful intentions were meant to feel like?
Our bodies...
our bodies dancing as if in a waltz or the forbidden tango
As the leader switches place, the languid grasp you've gotten
on these hips propel me to do e'en more 'aughty things
but reaching for that peak--
emotions running feverishly
To me, in my mind, I'm now the rider
and you...you are my horse cantering along
with simple ease
Finally at the top, a decision is made
Do we stay and sleep or climb back down
to relive our blissful entourage again
Author notes
i didnt know about this contest until a good friend told me about it. my thoughts about this contest is good and i like the idea of it
Written October 3rd, 2005
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A contest entry
- Alright bring on the erotic poems by poets delight.
300 points, ended October 17, 2005, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Brilliant! Took me a while to get past the picture..*giggles* couple of things. "Pressure escalates to when your body meld onto my own for a union" mix up of tenses? or am I just being dense? *shrug* oo and there was something else...*thinks*
"Ohhh this is what
lustful intentions were meant to feel like?" <- should that be "is this" (as opposed to "this is")?
Either way, I loved it
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WOW...This is an awesome erotic poem!!! I love the way it was written!!! The metaphors were great!!! This definately deserves a trophy!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
well my thoughts on this is that it is very different and distinctive than alot of erotica poems. good luck in the contest!
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