This one has but one wish,
to help those
who cant help themselves,
to be there
for those who mourn,
and to be kind to all
who come my way,
that is this ones only wish.
Author notes
This one's may be limited to the confines of a city with his influnce, but his wish is to help people every where and do as much as is humanly possible to help the Human race.
Written October 3rd, 2005
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is that truly your wish? sorry for my sceptism (or whoever you spell it), but there aren't that many selfless people around these days. it kinda makes one a bit nervous when you think about it.
anyway...your poem was beautiful and, more importantly, hopeful. a few spelling/grammatical errors, but they're largely overshadowed by the content and simplicity of your poem. again, it was really quite beautiful. a simple wish, but not an easy one. -
H3LP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a wonderful wish to have, you might want to expand your borders beyond the city limits. |\|!(3 idea, but \/\/#3[\] !7 (0[V]3$ down to the actual helping, j00 may find it harder than just talking about it. Anyway, good luck w!+h whatever comes your way.
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Wonderful
Hi,Himura Kenshin:
This is a wonderfully noble poem one of great caring and very well crafted.you are truly a very talented poet,well done.
mrsfoss -
i know how u feel... i wish i cld help the world... or in ur case ur city... its good to know tht there r still ppl who are generally nice... good job and thanx for your entry!
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