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The spirt battle

The time has come for me to fight.
Fight the most hardst battle I will ever fight.
     I will fight my own heart and soul.
For what it tells me rip's my heart into pieces.
     How can I turn my back on you.
How can I walk away and tell you I don't love you.
     I have changed alot im not me.
I can't keep going on in this spirtral wreck anymore.
  Forever im I fallin will I stop spining

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Written October 3rd, 2005

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  • josh-13
    October 6, 2005
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    Hey man, stay up, the trials we face sre needed in life,With The ones we lose, there's somthing we gain. He Don't dout, This spiritual wreck is somthing everyone must face, Don't lay down and give up. Life itself is a constant fight against our desires and against this world. Keep up the faith, through light you can make it through anything.


  • afirefly7
    October 5, 2005
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    you need to let know shelby what is going on..its not fair to her for you what your doing...you at least owe her tht much


  • BritBrat
    October 4, 2005
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    aww babe i love it but it is so sad. If there is anything i can do you know that i will do it...you know if you need to talk to anyone you know that i am here...but you need to follow your heart and everyone knows that your heart does not lie..great write babe...keep up the good work.


  • devils-angel69
    October 3, 2005
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    nice work....like the flow too....always write from the heart....cause the heart don't lie!!!!

    devils-angel69.....Heather Marie