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all for one





meek and mild in the cage laid
like won't hurt a fly, even if freedom's paid
feathers clung to body, though dry and velvety.
 /isn't worth the stress, flapping feathers make noise
 /as pecking order tampers with choice.




footsteps on the loose moist sand,
loud and impounding like an advancing band,
to the cage to seek space for a rookie.
 /rebelious sounds though raised, master's mind is made up
 /to raise more till debt's paid up.



never knew the wind carried strength,
'cos he rose higher with each breath,
feathers dead sprang like the porcupine spines.
 /can't miss out from this life tale
 /cos the entrant is female.



pride to the wind, honour was the theme
of the contest for the creme de la creme
even the frail grew to equal the strong
 /lose the game, roll in shame
 /only one wins, others their failure tame.

Author notes

this piece talks about competition. peeps say competition brings out the best in one. pls go thru this with the picture of birds in mind. thank you.
Written October 3rd, 2005

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