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Up Up And Away

I knew a guy name Santa Claus
Drove so fast he broke the laws
He was really lively and quick
This speedy guy is also St. Nick


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Written October 3rd, 2005

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  • JLZdancer
    March 21, 2006
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    Wow that is so cute. i like it alot. you are really good writer.


  • Sandygram
    October 9, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Vicki for the wonderful comment. Terrific contest. Hope you have a nice day. Take care, Sandy


  • Vickie J
    October 5, 2005
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    This was cute, Sandy!!! It's obviously a hit with the audience, too. Thanks for your entry!!~vj


  • Sandygram
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    AH Thanks a bunch Di. I appreciate it. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy


  • Sandygram
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the nice comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much Liz for commenting on my poem. Yes the holidays are coming. They will be here before we know it. Hope all is well with you. You are in my thoughts and prayers even though we don't seem to converse as much as I would like too. God Bless you. Love, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the wonderful comment Tim. I truly enjoyed reading it. You are a terrific AP son. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    October 3, 2005
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    awww... short yet v adorable piece Sandy
    I enjoyed reading this lil poem of yours
    Di


  • Autumn Whisper
    October 3, 2005
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    Great poem sandygram, excellent, BRAVO!!! And the picture is cool, hey if you like writing Christmas poems, then why don't you enter my contest Christmas With A Twist, there's 551 points up for grabs If you do, then i wish you the very best of luck and I would be most grateful, and if not, maybe my next one eh?
    Good luck in this contest
    Marvellous poem once again
    best wishes as always
    Shimmering River


  • Sherry gold member
    October 3, 2005
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    Cute poem well written. Sherry


  • Forms of Me
    October 3, 2005
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    This is soooo cute Sandy. I really enjoyed this one....I love Santa Clause too...smile... I hope you are well.

    LIZ


  • Sharcu silver member
    October 3, 2005
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    I love Santa Clause! Awesome poem... Good luck in the contest! I would have had a hard time pulling off this kinda poem with the rules of the contest, but you managed to do that, so excellent job.

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