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Unintiltled 4/Unintitled 5

We will look back at the recycled words
That we wished we would have said
Dig up memories that we wish we never had
We will take the tears and brush them aside
We will feel the pain of a life so washed up like the tide
We will hide away like criminals who don't know what else to do
All we do is replay that day in our heads
The day it all went wrong
The day we should have stayed in bed.
We cradle our sorrows and we brush away the tears
Drown in the  clear but poison wine
That have found themselves upon the cheeks of someone
who just wants to live in peace.
All of this because of loving you
Now here I am throwing my hands up in despair
Okay, okay,  I will call out your name
Onr last time before the final goodbye departs from these dryed and cracked lips but you will always be mine.
You will always be mine.



Author notes

Not very good, I could have brushed it up as I do with some but I don't feel up to it at the moment.
Written October 2nd, 2005

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  • split-person-ality
    October 3, 2005
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    wow great job very heartfelt very true and emotional..great jobe i like both of them alot.ur such a great writer.keep writing all of this great poetry