Dont tell me that youre sorry,
we both know its a lie
and if your so damn righteous,
just try and say 'goodnight'
well, im not so forgiving
and im not going to make
the same old situation
that leads to the same mistake
chorus
dont tell me that you love me
as im halfway out the the door
dont tell me that you need me
you never needed me before
you bent me you broke me
and while i never understood,
you can bet i understand you now
thats why im leaving here for good.
*end chorus
dont say im being stupid
its not your place to say
all the times i didnt fit
with you and all your ways
dont promise me youll change
because its just as well
this place you promised would be heaven
has transformed into hell
*chorus
you never really loved m
even though i loved you
this cant be all im meant for
this cant be all im due
so buy yourself into a place
of drunken ecstasy,
its all im sure youll ever know
but thats just fine with me
chorus x2
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Written October 2nd, 2005
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excellent
excellent write! I would jam this song on my guitar! -
Fabulous rhythm and rhyme!!! a peice of art! Well done
Shelly -
Good rhythm and rhyme here, I like it. I like the chorus especially the first part and "you never needed me before."
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This is very deep emotional and the lyrical rythem punches ya in the teeth this is a very powerful write thank you for allowing me to read your song it is very brilliantly penned..
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Wow. There were a few little errors, but nothing big. This would make a pretty cool song. Good job, its not everyday that I see lyrics as well thought out as these.
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Wow fill of emotion, I WANNA HEAR IT ACTUALLY IN A SONG! Interesting though. Keep writing.
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wow...very dark hateful poem...you loved this person and they just lied, turning all that as good to bad. Destorying the good that you had before....good song I would love to hear it put to music...very well written!
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BROVO!!!!!!!that's true..that's dep..that's real deep..i feel the same..why say sorry..when you don't mean it??
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