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out of the jar

it's because i refill
heartburn sears, liar
crunchy
so apathetic
it didn't taste or arouse
it just was
that's what i dread the most
then -
he'll cry
like last time
why bother the second tango
but I've never had much control
over -
yes

hazy
seemingly less interested?
which agitates me now
and the signature roll
HITS
and nearly everything shows love
except everything
which shows nothing
and I'm not content
and mostly not
just
just anxious

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Written October 2nd, 2005

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  • leecansing
    October 8, 2005
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    Mostly - Peanut butter...but don't think your suspicion isn't near the heart of the matter...you're too good for that...
    -cj-


  • YellowCard
    October 5, 2005
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    Good-Phillip I believe

    Phillip? That is exactly what I thought of when I read this. I dunno. What's going on with you two? I was so surprised to see you together the other day...but it would make sense with what's been going on and what's been said. Hmmm...makes me think.