The brilliance of the morning's sunrise,
glowing blazed over eastern shores.
Birds awaken to tree tops meal supplied,
absents of rainstorms from the night before.
Fresh scent of floral carries across field and marsh,
morning has once again broken serenaded by a lark.
Cat fish are jumping in the waters muddied tarnish,
morning's glorious gift of beginnings leaves it's mark.
Sun climbs higher in the mid morning bluish skies,
warmth of summer's nurture of the living gift supplied.
As I stroll along the shoreline of the glistening lake,
everything in natural splendor seems to be in it's place.
~~Suseann~~
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Written October 2nd, 2005
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Lovely!
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What a lovely scene you paint through these words you have used in these lines - very sensual and a good flow to the piece. There is a double space after stroll that can be changed into a single one- then all is excellent. Love your author page too, by the way.
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THANK YOU. THIS IS A WAY BACK IN MY ANCIENT HISTORY PIECE.I HOPE TO OF GROWN POET WINGS SOMEWHAT SINCE THIS. BUT HAD FORGOTTEN I'D WROTE IT TILL YOU REMINDED ME. THANKS SO MUCH AGAIN,I APPRECIATE YOUR VIEWS AND READING.
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