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Never

We meet again time pulls us together,
why cant we be together forever,
but truth comes to mind, and this shall be never.
Why cant you love me,
why does it have to end like this,
don't take away from me my kiss.
You Dennie my love,
from the ground to the stars,
but from death do i part,
i will love thee kingdoms heart.
For hear me now, i will never stop,
until time stops my clock.

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Written October 2nd, 2005

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  • Nihima
    April 6, 2006
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    Were you trying to manipulate the marriage vows and bible verses into this poem?? If so...interesting!

  • Nihima
    November 6, 2005
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    I love this poem! Its sooooo full of emotion and it is saddening!

    Silverlininng


  • BlackedByPurpleRain
    October 25, 2005
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    wow..amazing..kind of sad though ..if it's about someone then she's a lucky girl..great write...
    V
    XxX
    Edited on Oct 25, 9:31 because ''.