Deep
dark night
moon risen
grim witches fly
laughing children sigh
frightened animals hide
monsters and ghouls walk the night
the dead released from their torment
feasting on flesh the Devils delight
secret incantations whispered this night
Author notes
An etheree
Written October 2nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Round 1 of Many by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended November 15, 2006, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Your poem is 10 lines long (obviously). Max was 20, min was 5, and your poem it is an etheree. You followed the contest rules as well as the etheree form.
I don't have too much to say about it other than it was really well done and i applaud this poem!
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MusicalWings
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I like the way this sounded in my head when I read it to myself I'd just like to suggest a couple of words to adjust in the third line how about rising instead of risen and also in the last line instead of this night how about tonight?
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Wow this was and awesome piece my friend a great tribute to halloween. I see you have not wrote a piece in a while. I hope you get the urge to write again soon.
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Bravo !!!
Wonderful imagery and a good bet for the gold. VERY Holloweenish, spooky and fun at the same time. ADORE it
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Chilling poem
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thank you for your kind comments
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lol well done mum, this is really scarey actually. lol love you loads Mum....... i would try doing one of these poems but it seems really hard. ]
love form
Anna
ps sorry for the spelling miskates but ijust read jack his story and my eyes have gone funy. lol -
This is very clever, and very good. well done and good luck in the contest.
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kool i love halloween poems.exspecially this one! good luck! jaz
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This is very descriptive.A good stong write
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greatly good
this is very creative.
i like the shape and pattern of this poem. very eerie and spooky! perfect for Halloween. GOOD LUCK 
Edited on Oct 02, 8:44 because ''.
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