A year ago under the sky clear
Amongst all worries one can get,
Blessed by angels, probed by devils,
Among thousands we two met.
Dreams clashed and thoughts raced,
While my heart and pulse did fret,
With eyes racing about in search of love,
In thousands ours two met.
I lost myself in her breath,
And the divine air she wore about,
Then savored I every moment ,
While among thousands ,we two met.
But why did it have to be
So rough and hard to forget,
Memories scare me still, even tonight it shall,
Of the day when we two met.
But questions are many ,answers much more,
As love shuns almighty death,
Now I painfully understand ,it wasn’t anything
Than that among thousands we too met!
Author notes
Written October 1st, 2005
A contest entry
- Where is the Love? by akunin.
300 points, ended October 3, 2005, 11 entries
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i like this one, it's my kinda poem. a good story, well written, with a few gems in there, and well rhymed. i like the amongst thousands idea, and the blessed by angels, probed by devils line. good job, thanks for writing it for us and good luck in the contest
-akunin-
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