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Uniform Composition

Agression is needed for progression
Possesion is plauging my acention
Obsession of pain is my connection
Objection forfilling my correction

Simpathy is my empathy
Fluidity, a being of ecstacy
Painfully I see I cannot gain fully
Simphony of pain, limiting my accesability


Today you hear what I say
Always pain I feel everyday
Yesterday my thoughts make me pay
Stay and feel my thoughts today


Die, inside I will not fly
My mind opening to the sky
I cannot find a way to hide
I see your mind, again I cry.





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Written October 1st, 2005

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  • UncleSpace
    January 13, 2006
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    YES!

    Hi there! Nice job, cool stuff, check your spelling though. I hope you are well my friend, hang in there!

    Unc