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My Gift

To a smiling blue-eyed angel,
To innocense once strangled.

To memeroies, even lies,
To that guy with death in his eyes.

To that man so drunk he can't even feel,
To the lives that bottle steals.

To those who take drugs everyday,
To those who live in fear each day.

To a little boy crying in the corner,
To bloody wounds only he knows.

To a single mom with no money,
To a day thats not sunny.

To those who live in pain,
To those locked in chains,

To sickness and health,
To death do you part,

To those alone and scared,
TO those who never cared.

To those with no one,
To those who can't go on,

To those alone, holding a rope,
To you I give my gift...hope.

Author notes

I give hope to them who need it, for I have none my self.
Written October 1st, 2005

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  • ForgetthePAst
    October 1, 2005
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    this is really good...i like the rhyming especially in the last two lines...good luck!
    Cj

  • OurxBeginning
    October 1, 2005
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    Wow, this is really good, I love the hope that you send out, your rhyming was awesome! Thanks for entering, and good luck.