feeling distraught, and over the edge
not depressed, but crazy
out of reality, and into a dream
nothing, and nobody is real
in a moorage
and out of reach
i can sense my enemy
an in depth fear
feeling for comfort
and searching for defense
i can feel her getting near
reality can’t stop me now
blade in hand I take my place
my morals are gone
i will feel no guilt
rounding the corner
i can hear her breath
into the doorway
i strike her head
and onto the floor
she lays dead
in a sea of red
Author notes
take to concideration that this is not put together well.
Written October 1st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- A family with attitude (AP family for me) by UnderTheFloorboards.
300 points, ended March 7, 2006, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Well that would be easy to accomplish, hehe."
wow, you must be really stupid to use "hehe" in a poem, especially "lol" Im sorry to break the news to you but this SUCKED! sorry -
Wonderful job on this! I like the way this is put together and I am glad that you entered.
good luck in the contest!
Love,
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NIce...I really like it...fantastically written
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Kate this kicks major ass hun!! it's tits! rock the fuck on!
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~Kambodia
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