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It's All Gone...

I can't believe this!!
What have you people come to??
How could you mask this?
Wait, let me back up.

My anger is centered around:
Lies. Deciet. Masks. Pretending.

The personal bit:
Everyone hates me,
Or my boyfriend Joe.
Mainly Joe, though.
And the thing is,
I don't think he knows!
To his face, everyone
Is SO honeysweet.
But to me,
"Oh I hate him, bla bla bla..."

It is complicated, you see.
I don't know what to do!
So allow me to restate:

I can't believe this!!
What have people come to??
How could you mask this?

Honesty...
...It's all gone...

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Written October 1st, 2005

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  • The Blind Bandit
    October 15, 2005
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    this is an exsample of a solid gold piece work keep it up and sorry about what happened.


  • Mrs Shinoda
    October 8, 2005
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    is there something bothering me? yes, always...

  • Vampykitty
    October 2, 2005
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    not bad.. why is there someting bothring u? how is ti goin w/ u and ur fream guy?


  • Mrs Shinoda
    October 2, 2005
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    hell ya, evry1 but me, my sis, and-uh-he duznt hate himself

    thnx 4 the comment

  • XxLucifersXBridexX
    October 1, 2005
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    wow...this is pretty sad.... did that really happen? i mean does every1 hate ur boyfriend?! and i dun think it's all that horrible....maybe just a tiny bit
    keep up the great work
    janie

  • Mrs Shinoda
    October 1, 2005
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    y thank you. might i ask why, though?

  • hidden093
    October 1, 2005
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    HORRIBLE!!!

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