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long long time waiting

I知 almost to the point
Of action that cannot be returned
My soul is lonely
The world seems to hate me
God loves me, I believe with everything
But I知 getting to torn apart
No one here can I believe truly loves me
No one here I feel I can trust
I always get pulled back by the
They probably only feel sorry for me
I知 scared of rejection
Of when they find out I知 human.
Will they think I知 just perfect
Will it be like this forever?
Who here can I trust?
How long will I have to wait?
For God to put someone in my path
That will see me
My flaws, my desire for good, God and love
Someone to love me,
Because of God
Not because they feel sorry
I cry out
My savior, I love you
I知 waiting.

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Written September 30th, 2005

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  • RMBramwell
    November 21, 2006

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    Emily, You have no need to feel like this. I do... but you don't. People love you more than you know. Who cares what God thinks? It's the humans that matter right now.


  • May 1, 2006
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    This is an amazing poem Candy. I can relate in sooo many ways. It's a really beautiful poem that just...I love it. And I love you!!! Your a great poet. Better than me. I admire you so much.
    Blawndy


  • theuseofpronouns
    December 18, 2005
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    I love you Emily!!!... In the Jesus non-creepy kinda way of course. lol! Unfortunately... with love comes pain.. that's why it's always a risk. Keep your head up. I like that poem on the front of your page thing. lol! God bless, Hannah
    Oh!! Merry Christmas!!!

  • bluebaby92
    December 6, 2005
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    wow! this has to be one of my favorites. the feeling i got when i read this was different from when i read others and that's just fantastic. you did a lovely job. keep writing!