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*Shakes Head and Walks Away*

Ugh, here we go again.
My Muse left me.
Just because
I won't give you a raise,
Muse my dear,
Doesn't mean take a vacation!
Now,
I wont beg, but...
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE,
(I'm on my knees here)
Come back to me!!
What's this?
You never left?
I have been ignoring you?
What ever, I know you left.
*Shakes head and walks away*...

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Written October 1st, 2005

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  • j0eY
    April 4, 2006
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    haha wow you are to much julia ^_~


  • dame de la riviere
    November 30, 2005
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    you tell 'em girl!

    hey darlin', thanks for the laugh, just what i needed tonight. hilarious discourse with that fickle Muse of your's. they're rather tempermental characters aren't they, clingy one minute....running away the next. ah, but where would we poets be without them. i think most everyone can relate to this poem of yours. nice work. c'est tres bien ma cher amie! hugs and 's, Dannie
    p.s. hope to hear from you...hope all is well.

  • WandererofSouls
    October 14, 2005
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    Muses are de evil, leaving you when you need them most.

    Heheh. But great poem. <3

    -Lizz


  • 13darkhearts
    October 2, 2005
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    thnx ellie
    and yes, sorta. u talk to myself often, and my friends, and nothing has happened recently.


  • little-hug
    October 2, 2005
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    lol great poem !! It made me smile You are a brill writer. You talk to your muse ? lol this poem is so good.
    byeeeeee

    Ellie


  • Just waiting
    October 1, 2005
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    Cute poem

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