You start off standing straight
(Your heart unbroken, and unworn)
Take a breath of fresh air
(Working up the courage to tell him how you feel)
Then you begin to fall
(He admits that he feels the same)
Your hands hit the ground
(You realize that he isn't what he seems)
Your body falls over itself
(You leave him, and afterwards realize that he's the only one for you)
And then you stand back up again
(Mend your heart and start the fall all over again)
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Written October 1st, 2005
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Excellent!
this was a clever lovely poem, i loved your description of a breaking heart excellent write! -
and this is directed towards whom? this almost makes me feel guilty for something i havent been aware of being wrong... is this for kurt... or am i just stupid... is this to put yourself in a friends place... or am i just stupid... and if you want to get rid of me... tell me i'm stupid... i love you...
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Wow. This makes a lot of sense. I like how you described a breaking heart to falling. Great poem. Keep up the great work!
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