((((my first try at writing lyrics....))))
I picture this song being sung against the background of a guitar and a cello. What do you think? What should be the chorus?
"gut instinct"
got airwaves/ and miles to go
white eyes/ pale slivers of green
pounding against black
i miss passerbys/ the hounding
of trucks hitting the pavement
like water shape shifting
to salmons breeding...gut instinct
your white eyes/gut instinct/white eyes come calling
got airwaves/ miles to go
gutting the grand canyon
the pueblo huddled so still...
so still...
so still....
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Written October 1st, 2005
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I can't say anything, as I am ignoring this.
grand canyon salmon swishing.

