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Missing You

I lay in the grass,
looking up at the sky,
missing you,
i cry

Since you've been gone,
it hasn't been the same,
i've changed alot,
missing you

I feel more lonelier,
than i did before,
i get into more fights,
since you left me here alone

yes i still have family,
but they aren't the same either,
mom sleeps alot,
missing you too

my sister has been doing stuff,
that she didn't do,
hitting me,
i hope she is missing you too

my brother is,
sleeping in late,
and doesn't go outside unless he has to,
maybe he just misses you

you where great to us,
so we'll always love you,
you'll always protect us,
that's why we miss you

so as im sitting here on the grass,
wishing you were here,
i will try to help you and,
protect the family i still have

WE LOVE AND MISS YOU, GRANDMA!

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Written October 1st, 2005

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  • MyFairyTale
    October 23, 2005
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    Although I know she can read it... even if i dont, cafegroundzero...


  • MyFairyTale
    October 23, 2005
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    No I haven't been up there since I wrote it... I can't stand be around where you know her body is... But next time I drive down there I'll try too... Her grave is about 80miles from here... I might just go lay iit by here head stone... thanks for the idea and the comment!


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    Bless and may she rest in peace

    Good one. Did you leave a copy on her grave?


  • Krispy Kreme
    October 23, 2005
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    Aww ! I am so sorry to hear about your loss. I hope everything is smoothing out. May your family be soothing through this time. I hope you may truly be blessed with peace that will ease the pain. I hope everything goes okay
    Take care
    keep it up


  • October 1, 2005
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    Well lad, from a fellow Yorkshireman, I can understand your vitriol, but did you knoe that ORIGINALLY, the Yorkshire rose was red?
    It was those Lancastrian BASTARDS wot nicked it!
    Just a little amusing aside.
    My brother, wh's a fit 73 yr old breeds roses (or is it cultivates?)
    There is tremendous international competition in this field.
    Paul cultivated a NEW rose which was accepted by the USA society which deals with these matters of magnitude.
    He offered to plant a whole garden at York racecourse (at his expense), and call the rose The Ebor Festival.
    The clerk of the course gratefully accepted.
    Before this years Ebor, Paul wrote to the clerk, asking for complimentary entrance tickets. This was refused.
    he wrote back telling the course where they could stick their tickets, and that his new rose would now be dedicated to somewhere else in the city. Actually, it's going in the Minster gardens, where Paul used to work as chief stone mason.
    Fickle chap eh?
    He also gave up religion when he got a parking ticket outside St Wifred's church on a Sunday. He thought if that's the way the Lord works, then he didn't want to know.
    He's a raving nutcase!
    Just thought I'd share that with you.

  • MyFairyTale
    October 1, 2005
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    Like I told flyingspur i sure hope she would of liked it. Glad you liked it!!!!


  • MyFairyTale
    October 1, 2005
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    thank you flyingspur. I didn't start writting poetry really until after she died. So I hope she would of liked it.


  • amandapoet15
    October 1, 2005
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    aww ur grandma would have loved this pome. it is so cute and just wonderful. i loved the emotion you put into it. fantastic job!

  • flyingspur
    October 1, 2005
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    emotional

    your grandma would be very proud of the way you have put this together....well done....sorry for your loss

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