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I Melt In Your Arms

i'm melting as you hold me in your arms,
i feel safe and secure,
as i look up,
you smile down at me.

as if you were my body guard,
you saved me many times,
i trust you with my life,
i melt in your arms.

i fall down,
and you pick me back up,
as if you were always around,
i melt in your arms.

i think of you when your not around,
i wish you were here then,
but i know your always watching,
as i melt in you arms.

i'm melting as you hold me in your arms,
i feel safe and secure,
as i look up,
you smile down at me.

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Written September 30th, 2005

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  • MyFairyTale
    October 3, 2005
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    Thank you, glad you liked it!

  • XxLucifersXBridexX
    October 2, 2005
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    awe, this is so cute... sooo soo very cute... great write, keep it up
    janie

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 1, 2005
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    Very nice. That's a pleasant feeling to get from someone. I hope this person remains a part of your life for a long time (providing this is a true story, of course. lol. )


  • hopeful-tragedy
    September 30, 2005
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    Aw! I love this poem! I feel the same way about someone, and this was...was so freakin awesome!