You can't tell, but I'm screaming inside.
So rip me open and make me cry.
Tell me how much you hate me and how closed off I am.
Run away like all the others.
Don't bother trying anymore.
(It's just not worth your time.)
Call me a .w.h.o.r.e, and a bit.ch, and a liar.
Go ahead, runaway baby.
I won't even force you to stay here.
I never liked you.
No, not at all.
(Can you here the lying whispers in my voice?)
[Suddenly,]
Things stop.
You're long gone by now.
Time has passed and I haven't changed any.
Too many boys have tried to rip me open.
And too many boys have failed.
Go ahead Kids,
Just keep running away.
Author notes
Inspired by the first 2 lines.
Wahoo. This one's not as bad.. I guess.
Not so personal either.
Written September 30th, 2005
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i like the choppy flow of the poem as well as the format. it was really interesting and unlike anything that i have ever read before. i liked the creativity you use with your poetry since some is not really personal. i can't do that. all of my poetry is something that was set off in my mind after an emotional outburst or something.
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awesome poem! i like ur wording..good write
byz
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loving it... keep them coming
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wahoo poem! yay im happy for you. your muse has returned! whee
Awesome poem by zee way i love the opening lines. the ryme but then they dont just kinda they way you read it, it reads like candy! oh boy!
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