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goodbye

Good Bye Cruel world
I'm Sick Of Your Monsters
I'm Tired Of Your Doubts

Good Bye Cruel World
I'm Tired of Your Hopes
I'm Sick Of Your Dreams

Good Bye Cruel World
You Brought Me Nothing But Dissapointment
You Killed My Soul

Good Bye Cruel world
I Don't Care To Thank You
For My Life Here On Earth

Just For Get I Ever Existed...

Author notes

i hate living... it hurts...
Written September 30th, 2005

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  • ecvodca
    January 4, 2006
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    good job..sticking it to the world, attitude is good too. you are a good writer, i enjoy this poem. thank you.
    sarah


  • Night-lord
    November 16, 2005
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    awesome

    yikes i'm glad i'm not the world you might hurt me.. geez this came from somewere deep and i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing


  • whispersoftly
    September 30, 2005
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    yes but it gets better this i promise a good but dark write with lots of emotion well done xx Cheryl