Feel just a simple
touch in fevered awaitment...
give in to temptation before
the all consuming fire goes out
I grab her fire, it is hot... and wet...
in places maybe I shouldn't have touched...
The way you look
makes my body yearn for
more
the way your body smells
of blazing lust turns me into
molten lava
I slip in... ohhhhhhhhhhhh...
heaven for me... is this legal, I wonder...
something so good has to be bad...
His hands every more insistent,
never thought that this
could be no more than a hazy dream
gone awry...
But alas, with fingertips
gripping for more, here I lay
wanting for more of an entourage
to continue
so I give her more, much more...
excited fingers play across her mounds of sensual heaven...
and her heaven thunders in response
I am stricken and captured
until she has her end
long after midnight...
..And to him, I just give
a sultry smile thanking him
for this night's pleasurable
sin...
But something about his seductive
gaze impedes upon my now ravished
body, however, this will only be
more to come later
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Written September 29th, 2005
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I really like the tenderness of this piece... the give and take, the accented dialogue and overall sensuality. Erotica that I can use my own imagination to fill in between the lines.
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Leo Long -
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thanks
after a while a lot of ppl are drawn to just boring the imagination by writing the actions being actully performed. With this and another write Ive done makes the reader draw inward to the meotional aspects and leave the rest to imagination
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ur gonna have to excuse me if i had to go check ur page for ur age abigail cause i try my hardest to keep minors away from my adult writes
Rae -
unfinished sensual, finished orgasmic!! erotic without the filth well done lol abigailxx
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