I kept waiting for a message
from the man I loved a lot
I kept typing little love notes
blank emails are all I got
Now he says he loves me
I am all his heart desired
but to fall in love with me
a computer was required
I keep getting blank emails
the words lost in cyber space
I took this computer apart
they were gone without a trace
Then I really started thinking
this guy must be full of crap
he's lieing through his teeth
with the computer on his lap
Now I have his blank emails
sent directly to the deleted file
I told him we were through
but he still sits there in denial
Now he blames the computer
for breaking his heart in two
for erasing all his loving words
that told me "I love you"
So if you get a blank email
someday when you're on line
just click reply and send
those loving words were mine
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Written September 29th, 2005
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excellent write
this was so cute! you did a marvelous job! so full of laughter, i really enjoyed this!
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Barry, yes there are a few emails I wish I never recieved and a few I regret sending. Thank you for the nice comment. I am glad you enjoyed. Always a pleasure to read your comment. Thank you for the smiles this morning. You take care of yourself. Hope you enjoy the grandchildren on their triumphant return.
No don't pull your hair out. Take care, Always a friend, Sandy
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fantastic, funny and well written.
Great work sandy but I wish I culd get some blank emails instead of the insults just because I have been fighting the cheats and Vultures.
I loved the way this flowed and the bright and breezy nonchalant way it sends your message.
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This is the funniest of poems I have read today. I am sorry I never get the chance to come read your work...often....
I find here what I missed....sigh..
I have gotten a few blank emails....hummmmm wonder if they were indeed yours.....
Liz -
Great picture grandma, I think it's really funny, and great poem to go with it too, keep up the fabulous work
best wishes as always
Moonstone Virgo
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Funny, funny, funny.... I like the way you describe taking the computer apart. Reminds me of talking about throwing data that's been filtered on the floor or the "bit bucket". Of course, someone has to sweep all those bits into the recycling container.
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Thank you Don, always a pleasure to read your comments. Take care and God Bless. Sandy 
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nice
Nicely wrotten Sandy!!!
Always something different from your pen. This has such a wonderful flow and pleasureable to read.
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Hi Sis, This is very clever. I've always said that email love affairs can be very dicey. I prefer the face to face kind....with real hugs and kisses. Besides...it's not so easy to lie when you are looking into each other's eyes. Great poem. Loved the picture...I know the feeling. Linny
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AH I am glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to right. I guess I can relate to it myself. Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy -
Grand job!
Cute, and very funny! This was well-written and flowed, with no sense of the words being forced. A very natural and spontaneous kind of feel to this.
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Ah thank you AP daughter for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. I hope all is well with you. I know it can be so easy to fall in love over a computer. Take care, Sandy AP Mom.
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Ah thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. I do appreciate it. This was a fun poem to write. Take care, Sandy
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That you so very much for the lovely comment. I always appreciate your opinion. This was a fun poem. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the nice comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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This is a great poem. I love the idea behind it. Blank e-mails what a neat way to say what happens to people when they can only say they love you over a computor. Thanks for sharing xo
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love it
soo sweet!!!great write made me smile
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lol the little image thing was cute and so was the poem. this made me laugh and put a smile on my face. i'll have sharon to read it...i know she'll love it. thank you Mom for this wonderful write
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Very cute Sandy - working in the biz of desktop support, I have seen many attempts at destroying that computer, trying to get the bits of words out of them. One funny one was a message that was going around where the person changed the color of the font to white and so it looked like it was a blank email until you selected all and, why lookie there - the words were there afterall. thanks and keep sharing!
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adorable, humorous poem. you rhymed quite well, and unforced.
love the picture too :]
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Humor is right, for all of us who send e-mails that never arrive or are lost in cyberspace, this is so true. Loved it. easy to read and understand, flows nicely - well done.
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