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Power of Another Nature

She doesn't need your strength to fight her wars. Oh no. She's got status of a different kind. Pure manipulation baby; and if you don't believe me, try saying you don't want it when she's looking at you like you're the only one worth having. Even though you know she's had everyone else around. Boy, that's power you can only dream of.

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Again, this is not a poem, just a blurby thing but it was way to short to lable as blurb-story so.. It goes over here. Just shoved over here so I can keep all writings in one place, posting does not really mean I did a good job/am proud, so feel free to ignore this piece =)
Written September 29th, 2005

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  • I Hope You Choke
    September 30, 2005
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    lol i kinda liked it... a little bit weird-- i must say-- but i liked it all the same ^_^