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Cry

With everyday that goes by
Toxins filter all the pain
Every thought ends in "why"
Nothing left but the shame

She wants to cry

Tearing all the layers left
Leaving trails of flesh and bone
Cracking and Pounding makes her shift
Everything there but all alone

She wants to cry

Scars left ashes of her
The loved & kept turns to hate
Found the symptoms but no cure
Hope finds her way too late

She wants to cry

Author notes

During one of my classes, the class was discussing how to release tention in muscles in the shoulders.
The first thing that came to mind...
is my personal way of doing so, I cry-
It's a universal way for me to release the stress.

Written September 22nd, 2005

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  • Melodic Screams
    September 29, 2005
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    Stupendous

    well...its a very good write...its different but great. Your very talented.