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Falling

Falling faster and faster,
Nothing can stop me,
Nothing will slow me,
My mind is racing,
My heart is pounding,
Nothing can stop me,
Nothing will slow me,
My vision is blurred,
My screams are unheard,
Still nothing can stop me,
Nothing will slow me,
The end is near,
And he has disappeared,
With nothing to stop me,
And no way to slow me,
The end comes quicker,
But you will not catch me when I fall...

Author notes

Well I got bored today in school and wrote this, I don't really like it, but leave comments to tell me what you think. It is kind of about my ex, because he used to tell me he would always catch me when i was falling (which I do a lot), but now he won't.
Written September 29th, 2005

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