Lay your head down, child,
I'll protect you through the night
Lean on me, sweet precious;
there's no cause for your fright
Your keeper here to protect you;
just stay close to my side
Now go to sleep, my little pet;
these rules, you must abide
Calm down, little one,
I'll take you far away
Sweet dreams, lovely doll,
'til a brand new day
Put your trust in me, child;
you know you're safe with me
Be a good girl now;
keep quiet and you'll see
Hold your breath, darling;
it'll be over soon
I promise the pain will go away
come the set of the moon
Now rest, go to sleep, lying next to me
All mine, little one, let your crying cease
Tightly, I hold you for what you are
My little pet on collar and leash
Now, little child, worship me
Obey my demands for my bliss
My little slave, my twisted love;
give me your kiss
Author notes
I have no idea....That's the truth. I'm beginning to think there's something wrong with me with all the rhyming bdsm and then the twist in this poem is just...weird. 
It was ALSO inspired by A Perfect Circle's "Pet". The first line is from their chorus.
Written September 29th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Kinky Poems!!! by elmoisapunk.
300 points, ended November 19, 2005, 5 entries
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Good rhyming scheme and devilish imagery in this write, well done
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As usual, brilliant! I love that song, alomost as much as I love these!!
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brilliant
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Glad you like it...'cause my lsits are going to disappear when AP gets upgraded. e_e I'll have to recreate them, which I don't have time for.
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OOHOOO! 0_0 Rose, my dear, you are delightfully WICKED! Hehe...I loved this one. I believe I'm getting addicted to your bdsm folder. I bow to your mastery. I wish I could write "sexual" stuff in poetic form. *Sighs grumpily* Wench...
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wow this was a really deep poem. i really liked it
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I don't live a bdsm lifestyle, but I am very interested in the subject. As for the whole 'child' thing...you'd understand if you listened to the song that inspired this. I wasn't actually thinking of a 'child' in the sense of a seven year old...but more like a girl who's just on the brink of adulthood and who still acts like a child.
If you didn't know, it also has a hint of rape in the poem...though the song doesn't express such things. I wouldn't completely call it the tender side because of the whole 'rape'. I am, however, quite obsessed with bdsm at the moment. Particularly, the Master/Pet relationship. I was just finding it strrange back when I wrote this that I was writing so much bdsm because I never did before. Now it's become a habit. Thank you for your comment.
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Hey hey .. theres nothing wrong with BDSM, and rhyming is just fine as long as it's done as well as this poem was! You managed to write a beautifully touching piece here .. I always appreciate it when someone can point out the tender side of a S&M relationship, too many people focus only on the animalistic types. Course, it sounds like you're not into BDSM or something, from the comments you make .. but you still managed to write a lovely piece here.
My only thing with it is that you use "child" so much, which makes me imagine it as a real child, like .. 7 yr old kid or something .. that's not ok with me, but I just assumed you intended it metaphorically .. (y'know .. "you're vulnerable and trusting, like a child, so I'll call you "child" though you're NOT a child ..)
Good luck! -
Yeah...It is kind of sad people actually do this...Thank you for the luck.
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This kinda creeped me out. I know some guys that this poem is almost living out their dream. Good luck in the contest!
Hell Angel -
You're yet probably the third or forth person to tell me that!
I miss my free form writing, actually...I just can't seem to write it anymore. Thank you for your comment.
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This caught my attention and I had to read it twice. I think it's very well written. You can rhyme things and it comes out casually... Words cannot describe my envy...
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Thank you.
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i think this is AMAZING a realy really good write, not freaky just brilliant well done xx
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I think you're good, but thanks for the comment.
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This is so strange but it's a great write anyway. I envy your rhyming ability too. I am not even half as good a writer as you are. *jealousy*
. It's great to read your work.
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I can't remember the last time I went on a rhyming spree. ; It's kind of funny to be able to rhyme about bdsm. Lmfao. I just think I'm weird for writing it because I can't...STOP writing about it! Thanks for your lovely comment, darling. <3
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Lmao.. If you're weird for writing about it, then I must be really FRAKED for have actually doing it when I was younger. ~ Le Sigh. ~ It's good, none the less, though. Uhhh.. Yep! I do so envy your ability to rhyme.. ;.; Intended or not.. I still wish I had those mad skirlls.. ~ Cough. Giggle. ~ Yeah. <3
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