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Deception

A lie murders truth,
slays innocence in it's wake,
destroys character.

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Written September 29th, 2005

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  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 29, 2005
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    So true Suseann. You and I have had this conversation a few times. Lies are one of the few things that I have a hard time getting past and forgiving. Well done.

    ~Lyrical


  • suseann
    September 29, 2005
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    I'm so sorry.I in an attempt to custom a background,inserted 2 poems.Now the completed one is in.And I thank you for reading and hosting.~~Suseann


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 29, 2005
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    ooh, good haiku suseann, very well written, and i like the effect of the three colours, works well i wish you the best of luck in the contest, only 2 days now, fingers crossed itll go ok
    best wishes as always
    Shimmering River