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love at first sight

most memories i have
is a tear that falls down
but now i can finally say
someone wiped away my frown

he is a hero to my heart
he's a friend to my soul
true as a prince's tale
who makes my life whole

he's dreamy as can be
he shines in the dark
the moment i first saw him
i knew we had a spark

with each passing moment
i learn to love him more
these feelings that i have
i simply can't ignore

when i feel the shadow
of my haunting past
he is there to hold me
i found the one at last

he lifts me from my dreams
wipes away my nightmares
makes each moment magical
he wipes away my fears

when i cry with him alone
when no one is anywhere near
he holds me close in his arms
and wipes away my tear

he tells me that he cares
he says it honest and true
he says "your so amazing,
which is why you are my boo"

i don't know where this is going
but these feelings are so right
its so romantic how i can say
i found love at first sight

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Written September 29th, 2005

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  • bugga-boo-bunny
    May 5, 2006
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    that's cute...i really like it..shows pretty much how good he is to you. how much you like him. (i'm from the dance group saw you had a problem..i'm helpin out.)
    but anyways..i really like this. it reminds me of my boyfriend. ONLY sometimes he is the one hurting me. lol..it's a long story with him. but this is very cute..it think anyone wo erads this if they have ever been in love..it would be like...reminding them of their boo!


  • Deserted heart
    December 30, 2005
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    Wow I really loved this write. "he is a hero to my heart
    he's a friend to my soul" is such a great statment. The ones we love we see as our hero. Rescuing us from the evil world and our closest friend whom we share all our secrets. This was just great I really liked it.


  • xXLoveXx
    September 29, 2005
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    i know but its cuz i didn't have time cuz i was writing it in class and i ran outta time... but i am going to continue it...thanks for the comment!!


  • Deindichter
    September 29, 2005
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    This is good write, I can see your feelings for him come alive as you write, I just feel the ending was a bit short, possibly a bit more concluding of an ending could fiinish it off a bit better. Though as I said I feel this is a good write.