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Come walk with me

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Why do we have to meet this way?
We’re not free to be together
you have a wife, I am wed too,
our love grows stronger every day.

This is our secret meeting place
as we meet by the waterfall.
How I yearn to love only you
to be found out is a disgrace.

Come let us sit on the bank here
hold me in your arms my true love
kisses from you I long to have
you are everything I hold dear.

I want to be with you always
to stand beside you so proudly
is my greatest dream come true
sweetheart into your eyes I gaze.

Come walk with me as we admire
the beauty of the waterfall,
we must part until next we meet
my heart is filled with desire.

© Jennifer 9-29-05













Author notes

Picture 1 was the one I chose.

I commented on your poem The Voice

contestant poem was My Secret Place tormentedangel
Written September 29th, 2005

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  • Elfin
    October 1, 2005
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    Well done Jennifer on your acheivment in this contest
    Elfin
    Edited on Oct 01, 2:17 because ''.


  • catlovergirl
    September 30, 2005
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    ok................


  • jenelda silver member
    September 29, 2005
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    OMG don't be influenced by Yem. he's a crazy purple cow Moxie drinker


  • jenelda silver member
    September 29, 2005
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    Hey Yem, I'm a catlover too, I have two of them, they are my babies...CAN I HAVE ONE TOO!!!!

  • Yemassee gold member
    September 29, 2005
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    The Siamese is hiding somewhere, but I have a guinea pig who thinks he's a cat...want him?


  • catlovergirl
    September 29, 2005
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    i want a siamese kitty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 aaahhhhhhh!!!! kitties!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • catlovergirl
    September 29, 2005
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    maybe............... good poem!!!!!!!!

  • Yemassee gold member
    September 29, 2005
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    Ah, an assignation. I like that interpretation of that picture. It's written with a charm and warmth that almost allows me to forget the poor ignornat wife and husband at home...almost!

    I haven't read the other entries but this one sounds like a winner...wait a second,

    "HEY, CATLOVER GIRL, GIVE JENNIFER THE GOLD...THERE IS A FAT SIAMESE IN IT FOR YOU IF YOU DO!"

    She's a catlover, she'll go for it...expect the gold!

  • abdulrahman
    September 29, 2005
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    always standing first in all chance n lovely prsentation of work guess am too late to take part all stil u are there wat a nice work keep it up
    babe


  • Luna Argintie
    September 29, 2005
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    Is very interesting.Is it real?

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