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... have I always been...?

I think I'm lost
Or have I always been?
It's funny and sad
Leading myself astray
Down dark, twisting
Narrow roads I fear
Of bramble and briar
Of darker, deep melancholia
Please, please, please
Being strong is
Such a farce
I want to believe in me
Believe myself
But I can't trust
What I cannot see
My actions have always...
... gotten me into my own shit
I think I'm lost
Or have I always been?

Author notes

"In your love, my salvation lies in your love, my salvation lies in your love, my salvation lies in your love, in your love, in your love..."
Written September 29th, 2005

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