Porcelain
I dream a kiss so powerful,
Of lips so sweet and true,
Forever changing who I am,
I dream a dream, of you.
My eyes lost in your wonder,
As beauty now renewed,
My heart trembles, as our lips grow close,
And kiss my Love with you.
I stroke your face so precious,
My heart melts around the room,
The void it leaves within my chest
is quickly filled by you.
Your voice so soft and tender,
Your lips so sweet and true,
If eyes are windows to the soul,
Then heaven lies in you.
I wake to hug my pillow,
and look around the room,
I clench it tightly to my chest,
And pretend that it is you.
I cry no tears of sorrow,
For the lack my love, of you,
For if dreams of you are all I have,
Then dreams my love, will do.
Author notes
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Written September 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Options, People! GIVE IT ALL YOU GOT! by Mascaraed Beauty.
300 points, ended June 26, 2006, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Honorable mention
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What did you think
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What a crushing ending! It's frustratingly good. I love the imagery and the rhyming flows nicely. I don't know why you called it what you did but maybe that's for you to know and me to figure out. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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I love the flow in this and the imagery and descriptive words are beautful.
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this is wonderfully written thank you for adding it to my collection...i love the way you describe this person...they mean so much to you i can tell...stay strong
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Wow! This is awesome! GREAT flow! Very beautiful and romantic.
Thank you very much for entering and good luck!
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dayum! awesome job.
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Thank you!
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An absolutely beautiful sharing this is! Soooo romantic and sooo much devotion within every line of this piece! Thank you for sharing and for entering in the contest!
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awwww.this is a tear jerker. Truly stunning piece. Best of luck in my contest
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this is a truely romantic poem, and I like that!!Good luck in my contest.
Kal -
max, i cant tell you a million times how proud i am of you! you are an amazing writer and i hope you succeed in some sort of career in it, because the world deserves to see all these poems...keep writing forever!
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Wow! Congratulations on a stunning write! It really gave me a sense of wonder and appreciation. Stunning imagery, just...beautiful. I want to show it to my special person ;D
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Thank you!
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Congrats on winning gold!!! This is a great poem! Keep up the good work!
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i really like this poem good good good makes you sit back and think and look around at what you have
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Lol, well I'm glad you like it! And thanks for the comment
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freakin awsome. there thats all that needs to be said, oh you know that chick ^ you know the one above me, well if i wrote this it would be to her.
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OMFG!!! THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!! i LOVE it to DEATH!!!! i have to show my boyfriend this!!!! this is exactly how i feel about him i just didnt know wut words to put it in! its like you took wut was in my heart and put it on paper!!!! wow!!! i swear this is one of the best in the contest! im so glad you entered!!! i wish you the best of luck! ~Brittany~
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very beautiful...if this was dedicated to me id surely cherish it...thanks for sharing your crative talent and your feelings...it was such a joy to rea..keep it up!!
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