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Jesus , Word and the Book

Have you heard the message?
About a man from Nazareth
Man... he is so waycool?
His name is Jesus..
12 funky Apostles he gathered together
Talked of Father God who digs us all
Fed the multitude and wants us to join his possee

Have you heard the message?
About the word of our Father God
So much uncool suffering and pain in this world
Father God has all the answers.. yo.. he has the lot
If you don’t believe me take a look
For they are all written down.. in his book
Which book? ..the book of love. .the Bible..

Yo.. all the writings are so true..
What wonderful news..
For Jesus loves everyone.. even me and you
Wow! Such love from such a powerbase.
Coolest dude in the whole universe.
Let us all come together to show we love him
Love one another and show we really care

Even better news …

He’s on his way  back here ..right now
Yep an its happenin real soon
Coming to take us to a beautiful place
A cool ‘hood called Heaven
Place of lots of cool things..smiles sunshine and happiness
All you ever dreamed and more than you can see
He built it special....just for  you and me

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Written September 28th, 2005

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  • Hey, i love how you made the story of our Saviour modern, new and exciting but still keeping all the vital details in there, best of luck and thanks for entering!


  • SilverWolf
    April 28

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    Great poem
    its more casual and not real fancy
    it is true and i agree with you on this.
    like the style of it


  • Poetess12
    April 23
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    This poem sounds like rap to me. I like it and your word use is great.

    Thank you for your entry


  • quack silver member
    April 22
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    i love this its cool

  • you know. im not a god or 'jesus freak' and i like to read about deep emotional changes religion has had

    but i must say this is a stunning piece of work. its so fun! and funky and just adorable! great work!

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