Have you heard the message?
About a man from Nazareth
Man... he is so waycool?
His name is Jesus..
12 funky Apostles he gathered together
Talked of Father God who digs us all
Fed the multitude and wants us to join his possee
Have you heard the message?
About the word of our Father God
So much uncool suffering and pain in this world
Father God has all the answers.. yo.. he has the lot
If you don’t believe me take a look
For they are all written down.. in his book
Which book? ..the book of love. .the Bible..
Yo.. all the writings are so true..
What wonderful news..
For Jesus loves everyone.. even me and you
Wow! Such love from such a powerbase.
Coolest dude in the whole universe.
Let us all come together to show we love him
Love one another and show we really care
Even better news …
He’s on his way back here ..right now
Yep an its happenin real soon
Coming to take us to a beautiful place
A cool ‘hood called Heaven
Place of lots of cool things..smiles sunshine and happiness
All you ever dreamed and more than you can see
He built it special....just for you and me
Author notes
Written September 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Options! most anything goes! by Thendestinystruck.
550 points, ended January 6, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Beauty Of Faith by Georgia La Mariposa.
700 points, ended June 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey, i love how you made the story of our Saviour modern, new and exciting but still keeping all the vital details in there, best of luck and thanks for entering!
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Great poem
its more casual and not real fancy
it is true and i agree with you on this.
like the style of it -
This poem sounds like rap to me. I like it and your word use is great.
Thank you for your entry
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i love this its cool
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you know. im not a god or 'jesus freak' and i like to read about deep emotional changes religion has had
but i must say this is a stunning piece of work. its so fun! and funky and just adorable! great work!
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