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Vampire's Touch

My love, stronger than any other toxin,
My kiss is infected with poisonous ecstacy,
I want you to be addicted to my splender,
I yearn to be your only addiction..
My soul attacks your lustful heart,
Like a raven fiercely ripping at your rib cage,
Crimson drips into the pupils of my eyes,
There you will be hypnotised with no act of escape..
I smile dangerously at my evil,
My sweet, sweet evil,
As you are being captivated in my immortal charm,
I shall reveal to you my deepest secret..
I can give to you endless paradise,
Immortality,
Power and
Charm.
All it takes.. Is one bite..

Author notes

Ive always had a thing for vampires, the inspiration came from walking home in the rain.. Hmm..
Written September 28th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    May 31, 2007

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    Wooo!! Vampires...that's shmexy, no doubt. Lol...loved the atmosphere you created with such wonderful imagery. I gotta admit that was pretty HAWT! And well written, too, of course. Kudos, my dear!


  • Gendatalia
    October 5, 2005
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    Aww, thank you ever so much xXx


  • Rose Chloris
    October 5, 2005
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    That is one of the most seductive vampire pieces I've ever read. Very good indeed. Thank you for sharing this.


  • Gendatalia
    September 30, 2005
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    Yaay thank you Arishka *shows fangs* I am still obsessed with Van Helsing I was walking on my own because I just came back from being with Spud Zack n Kelz lol wot a nite that was! i was giggling throughout the whole nite it was fab!!


  • RestrictedReverie
    September 29, 2005
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    Very vell done Drucilla, my Vampire Sistah!! Um... Why were you walking in the rain on your own? Lol

  • piccola silver member
    September 29, 2005
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    bite me! LOL you invited that response you know .. btw; thanks for commenting on my work.


  • Gendatalia
    September 29, 2005
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    Vampires are amazing ^_^ glad to see another vampire fan! thanks a lot for your comment, it means a lot
    Take care xXx


  • Gendatalia
    September 29, 2005
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    Its quite inspirational, espesh if your on your own (I am on about walking in the rain lol!) and thanks a lot for your comments they are very appreciated
    Take care xXx
    ♣ ♥ ♠

  • RandomPoetGirl
    September 29, 2005
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    Whoa! This is really good. I too have a thing for vampires. Awesome job, all the best.


    Belva Jo


  • Miss Splenda
    September 28, 2005
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    Wow, great job! The imagery is awesome, I love: "Endless Paradise" and, "Poisonous Ecstasy". Great job! I really enjoyed this! I too love walking in the rain... o.O

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