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Everything Changes

Don't give up.
Stand your ground.
Don't let the wheel of fortune
Drag you down
Romancing the power
To control the moon,
The hermits heart
Dies all too soon.

Opportunity knocks
Destiny deadlocks
And everything changes
Everything changes.

Dreamers lie
In victory
Above the fall
Of reality
Ever prepared
For loves last stand
Reputation be damned
By fates hand

In appreciation
Of wise decision
Everything changes
Everything changes.

Temperance tossed
In prudent excess
Blending moderations
Is someone else's romance
With muddled thinking
And self restraint
A Sense of confusion
Traps its fate.

Haven of refuge
Puts down roots
And everything changes
Everything changes.

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Written September 28th, 2005

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    January 3, 2006
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    Thanks, Robert. Glad you took the time to stop by . When are you opening a new lyrics class? I keep looking for it so I can sign up


  • Methodic Breakdown
    January 2, 2006
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    Once again, you have impressed me. It seems like a majority of the songs here on AP are centered around the ideas of death and darkness. It's nice to see a song with a positive message, and one so well written! Very well done! Thanks for being the stable contestant in AP Idol. It's nice to have a coupld contestants that I know are in it all the way! 7 days! Oooooo, how ominous(sp?)!
    ~Robert


  • Servatis
    October 8, 2005
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    Woot! That made my day...

    I love that repeat of 'Everything changes'; it's well placed and adds a lyrical quality to an already awesome poem! Nice write! ^_^

  • TooRainbow silver member
    October 8, 2005
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    What an uplifting message! "Keep trying, keep believing, keep loving...no matter what! It will pay off because if you hang in there, everything changes." Wonderful lyrics! Very intense and emotional. Enjoyed the read. Great job!!
    Sheryl


  • J Rhys Davies
    September 30, 2005
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    Yep, everything indeed changes. Sometimes for the good, sometimes just the opposite. I think you did a splendid job with these lyrics. I myself am horrible at them, so I will let those that do them well, continue.

    ~ John

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