The blood of your heart is in my hands;
all of the weakness you hide
The clear glass cracked and charred,
though hidden while at my side
Naivety defeats my sense of reality
Because of it, I barely know you
I only wish to heal your heart's flaws
Tell me what you'll let me do
Let me show you there's nothing to fear
from what I feel for you
I ask not for you to feel the same
I just want to help you too
Be vicious if need be, but I'll be tender
I want to show you all I am
I'll hold your heart as silk holds flesh
I'll heal you all I can
I beg you not to turn me away;
let me stay by your side
My lifeblood flows just for you
To your rules, I will abide
I fear not what you will do to me
I know you will take great care
To be your pet is a chance to help you
because then, I'll always be there
To you I'll stay forever loyal
No worries of betrayal or pain
My heart pleads to keep your happiness;
to be what keeps you sane
Author notes
This was supposed to be an angsty write...to feed my depression and make it go away...
Then...
It turned into a Sharazon and Kira poem. 
Wtf?
Well, either way, I guess I like it. Sharazon belongs to Opaque Beauty. LOVE HER! ♥♥♥♥
Written September 28th, 2005
In a list
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A contest entry
- Contest # 1 by BlackBloodyRose.
300 points, ended October 17, 2005, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Awww it's so friggin' sweet! *toots bubblegum from all the happiness in the air* Frealz, cute write and so very Kira and Zon. Haha your author's note made me giggle. Funny how things switch around on us when we're trying to write. P
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I love it!!!!!! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ You do such a good job capturing both sides of the Master/Pet relationship!!!
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nice
that was nice -
Thank you.
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achieved total heaviosity
who could ignore such a pledge?
one would have to be made of steel
keep on keepin on
justine -
How strange!
I'm glad you liked this though. Thank you for your kind words.
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When I got half way down this poem it seemed very deja vu. I checked to see if i had commented before but I could not find such, so no I will comment. This is a very good poem. I particularly like:
"Naivety defeats my sense of reality
Because of it, I barely know you
I only wish to heal your heart's flaws
Tell me what you'll let me do"
That reminds me of how I was with my first "love". Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. -
very good
um ya i don't really understand it but it was a very very good write -
How strong is our link, bro, hm?
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One of the most critical aspect of friends, loyalty. One that is strong enough to take punishment for the sake of helping another is a great deed, but not one that many are capable of. Some will bleed and die together, others will not. Some links are just stronger than others...
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YES, but....it's because of Hell that Zon's so screwed up and can't get over the fear of love. Her death will be the start of a healing process for him.
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No! Even though Hell's demented she's great! So sad!!
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Oh, RIGHT....You didn't know that Toria and I planned to have Malise kill off Hell, and then have Kira want to be Zon's pet in order to make up for it...Well, now you know. That scene with Malise and Hell is gonna be gruesome...Heh.
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That would be interesting. Actually I was thinking more Helen and Zon then Lotta and Aimon, especially when it says 'pet'.
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You thought it was Belail and Ai or Rose and Zon, didn't you?
I SHOULD write one with Belail and Ai in mind sometime. I swear though, like I said to Opaque, I had NO control over this poem! Thank you for your lovely comment.
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I was trying to guess who it could be. I didn't do too well. This is yet another fantastic write! It's really sweet and dark which I love. Brilliant write.
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I swear I had NO control over this poem whatsoever! My hands wouldn't obey my brain! My brain was all like, "Depressive...write comething angsty, bitches." My hands were like, "NO! We're going to write about Kira wanting to help Zon, so THERE!" I wanted to write angst. Lmfao...
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Ahahahaah.. Obsessiveeeeee...
But, of course, we both knew this, and know that it's okay. ~Nod, nod.~ Annnddd.. Yes. ^ ^; I liked it. o o; It rhymed, and junk.. Which we all know I CAN'T do. ._. [ Rambling. ] Uh-huh. Keep up the wonderful work.. Insert other positive phrases and blessings of love.. HERE. <3
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Not angry...Sad or angsty, perhaps, but not angry. Thank you for your comment.
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Excellent
Fantastic write, I love this poem and if this was supposed to be an angry poem then I guess the anger was replaced with great wisdom and faith. Excellently written, keep up the great write!!!
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