tender sweetness coating
every nibble
a tantalizing sizzle runs
down my spine
yearning wet teeth waiting
to dig into the
crispy stratum,diving into
the soft succulent centre
a trip to the sweet valleys
satisfied all the way....
Author notes
I am back!! thanks to melissa's contests! 
Image credits - www.abbeyboxoffice.co.uk/data/images/width140/strawberries-235.jpg
Written September 28th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Taste: Succulent Strawberry by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended September 29, 2005, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well thank goodness you are back because I don't know what these contests would be like without your mastery. Hon, this is just fabulous, sensual and sweet. Delectable.
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a very good work.. i really appreciate the shortness of this poem.. Well done.. subtle and sweet.. Good luck in the comp
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Oooh, yummy!.... Very... descriptive... mmmmm strawberry!
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"crispy stratum" is a really creative way of describing it. I also liked "sweet valleys." Talk about YUM!
good luck in the contest babe.
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Wow Pi, you are back!!! This is sensually strawberry
Welcome back girl 
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